What do you See by Sadje
The challenge is to make a post on a picture given (original story, poem or a caption) and then to create a pingback.
Saturday Mix – Opposing Forces, 4 July 2020
Challenge is to make use of antithesis in writing. We will need to use the two opposing words in your response – which can be poetry or prose.
Our words this week are:
– ascend and descend
– hope and despair

In hope, I ascend.
My mind heaves a sigh of relief,
When the cage of weight opens wide.
The roots of despair gone deep
into my flesh through the skin,
slowly loosens up.
My blood, once contaminated with
the seeds of revenge cleans itself.
I close my eyes and close in my palms,
to feel the confabulations of mind
with the body- when free.
I am at trance.
I float like clouds in the sky,
I dance like the dandelions.
I hear the humming bird,
humming its tune into my ears.
Its long beak waking me up,
calling to rejoice.
Opening my eyes – my third,
I see the world, a different one.
I hear wings fluttering.
I feel wind through my body.
Light and subtle,
A sparrow carries my soul now.
Light and subtle,
I glide freely into the bird.
Now I descend –
from one world to another,
from one life to another.
I am free now, for I am a bird of spirit.
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Love to you Era ❤
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Lovely !
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Thank you Happy Soul 🙂 🙂
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This was so mystic, surreal and so BEAUTIFUL🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹💖💖
“My blood, once contaminated with the seeds of revenge cleans itself”
Love this❤❤
“I float like clouds in the sky,
I dance like the dandelions.”
Such beautiful lines😘😘💕
Love and hugs Nima🌹
Ishita❤
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Love and hugs to you Ishita 🙂
Thank you for the love 🙂 ❤
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A fantastic poem Nima.
Thanks for joining in the challenge
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Hello Sadje..
Thank you dear for the prompt. I enjoyed taking part 🙂
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You’re welcome Nima.
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Powerful words, very deep. Love this! 😀
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hey Anusha !!
Thank you so much for the read dear 🙂 ❤
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I like…blood once contaminated with seeds of revenge… Nicely done Nima
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Thank you dear Sangeetha 🙂
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Wow. That’s very deep. Beautifully written, my dear ❤️
You always manage to take my breath away with your beautiful poetry 😍
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Thank you Shweta dear..
And I always love to read your fiction.. short and the long ones.. !! ❤ ❤
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Lovely work, Nima.
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Thank you so much Melanie !!
Glad you liked it 🙂 ❤
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Hello. I just nominated you for the mystery blogger award :
https://myinnerbeing482229597.wordpress.com/2020/07/12/two-awards-2/🌺 🌹
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hey Zam !!! Am so happy with your nomination..
Will make a post soon 🙂 ❤
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Perfect! I can’t wait 🌺🌺
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🙂 🙂
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Surreal!
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Thank you so much Aashi 🙂 ❤
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This took me to another zone Nima. Deep and surreal feelings transpire here. Outstanding!! ♥️
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Thank you so much Radhika..
your words are honey ❤ ❤ ❤
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This is so lovely ..filled with solitude and serenity..
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Hey Mich !! ❤
thank you dear 🙂 Am elated to know that you like it 🙂
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I felt I was floating as your I read your enchanting words. Beautiful.
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Aww Keith.. there is no better comment that yours !! Thank you very much 🙂 ❤ ❤
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Beautiful!!
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Thank you Harsh 😁❤️
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Ah, to be a bird… I could be a fish too! 😉
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Yes !! 😃😃
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