Mindlovemisery’s menagerie : Photo Challenge #322
Yellow stroke on face
From yours to mine color spreads
Soul liberated
Desolating petty norms
Blind eyes but a yellow soul
PS : Happiness here denoted as Yellow.
This is written against the all the conditions the society has kept forward to fall in love. I have expressed that even a blind man can feel love and happiness, if the “other” one is willing to spread both. Beauty is just an external factor and real beauty lies in mind and soul.
Poetry Form : Tanka
It has 5 lines with 5/7/5/7/7 syllable count.
Total syllable count : 31
COPYRIGHT © 2019- 2020 Nima Mohan, thetenthzodiac.wordpress.com, ALL RIGHTS RESERVED
you are a fabulous poetess 💙
LikeLiked by 3 people
I do not know what to type in reply of your comment Era. You never fail to appreciate me and sometimes in more wayS than I deserve. Thank you so much dear 😍
LikeLiked by 2 people
You deserve it, believe me
Pleasure is all mine 💙
LikeLiked by 1 person
Loads of love to you Era 🙂 ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
💙🤗
LikeLiked by 1 person
I agree with Era. You are a really talented and fabulous poetess❤❤ This was absolutely amazing💕
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you for those precious words Ishita.
You and Era are always supporting me with kind words and gestures 🙂 ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Most welcome Nima✨❤❤ You deserve it💕💕😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much.. !!!! ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love it Absolutely!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hello Aathmana !! Long time 😊
Thank you and how have you been ?
LikeLike
Hey!!
Yup LONGGGGG time!
I am doing okay… Though the situation here is not that appreciable!😥 Covid, I mean.
Really taking a toll on us, I guess
Anyways… How are you doing??? I have been reading all your prompts but never got time to comment. I missed some though.. so I was catching up
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes.. very very long time 🙂
Hmm.. no place is free from Covid now !!
Where are you ??
Am doing good.. just as everyone is doing.. safe as of now ..
LikeLike
Yeah true.
I am from Thiruvananthapuram, Kerala.. might’ve heard about my place from the recent events.
I am so glad that you are safe. Stay safe, sister!😍🤩
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ohh yes !!!
As per the statistics, no district will be free by next moth. They will see a great surge in numbers from next month !! Its getting scary 😦 😦
LikeLike
Yep! And I am scared already! For my mom 😥
She is working as a nurse in corona ward of govt. Hosp
Been months since I last saw her!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ohh dear.. I feel for you.. so sad to know that. But be strong.. God will never let anything happen to our angels. He will always take care of them 🙂 We all are praying for them 🙂
I know how you will be missing mom 😦
LikeLike
Thank you for the explanation. I love the way you write. Your poems have so much depth! ❤️
LikeLiked by 2 people
I never used to do any explanations.. but decided I ought to do that 😊
Thank you so much Shweta 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
And it was a great decision! It’s my pleasure 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks again !! 😆😆
LikeLiked by 1 person
😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very deep! Loved the way you depicted happiness!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you so much Aashi 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lovely ! I think you should go for your book 😊👍
Beauty lies within ! So true
LikeLiked by 2 people
Hopefully one day Happy Soul 🧡🧡🧡
Thank you dear 😀😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful poem , its having deep meaning.💚
LikeLiked by 1 person
Glad to know that you liked it Anurag !! Thank you 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Most welcome Nima 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
😃😃😃
LikeLiked by 1 person
You put together thoughts with so much finesse. Beautiful Nima 💕
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your words are so full of love Radhika … thank you for the support 😊🧡
LikeLike
That’s a challenging prompt and your tanka is a wonderfully positive interpretation. Well done, Nima.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for the read Wallace. Your love is appreciated 🧡🧡 thanks a lot ❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow. So much love in these words 💕
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you dear ❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
My absolute pleasure
LikeLiked by 1 person
😊😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
“Blind eyes but a yellow soul”…. this is one is just so beautiful….our eyes maybe blinded but our soul will and forever see the truth of beauty thus bringing us inner joy and peace
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for resonating with me Mich !
Much love to you ❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
P.S.
I dont know why i cant hit the like button
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your comment itslef means a lot to me dear ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful thought and poem! 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much Prerna !! Am happy we met 🧡
LikeLiked by 1 person
😊💕
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful Nima:) I really like this one.. Amazingly written..❤
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you dear Ardra ❤️❤️
Glad to have met you here 😊
LikeLike
My pleasure😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
The explanation portrayed more depth in the poem. I loved it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes .. !!!
Thank you 🙂 ❤
LikeLiked by 1 person