Yellow Spreads

Mindlovemisery’s menagerie : Photo Challenge #322

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Yellow stroke on face
From yours to mine color spreads
Soul liberated
Desolating petty norms
Blind eyes but a yellow soul

PS : Happiness here denoted as Yellow.
This is written against the all the conditions the society has kept forward to fall in love. I have expressed that even a blind man can feel love and happiness, if the “other” one is willing to spread both. Beauty is just an external factor and real beauty lies in mind and soul.

Poetry Form : Tanka
It has 5 lines with 5/7/5/7/7 syllable count.
Total syllable count : 31


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      1. Hey!!
        Yup LONGGGGG time!
        I am doing okay… Though the situation here is not that appreciable!😥 Covid, I mean.
        Really taking a toll on us, I guess
        Anyways… How are you doing??? I have been reading all your prompts but never got time to comment. I missed some though.. so I was catching up

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                1. Ohh dear.. I feel for you.. so sad to know that. But be strong.. God will never let anything happen to our angels. He will always take care of them 🙂 We all are praying for them 🙂
                  I know how you will be missing mom 😦

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  1. “Blind eyes but a yellow soul”…. this is one is just so beautiful….our eyes maybe blinded but our soul will and forever see the truth of beauty thus bringing us inner joy and peace

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