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Life On the Beach

Decima Poetry Challenge by Ronovan – Prompt No. 68: (BEACH) in the A rhyme line.

There, on the shiny sandy beach,
I lived – morning, noon, eve and night,
counting days not, but breaths alright.
I knew not what she wished to teach,
Her blue sadness – I had to breach.

So I lived on the sandy shore,
where the hermits hid their amour.
Counting not sunrise and sunset,

but by number the sand got wet,
by the rare black pearls washed ashor
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19 responses to “Life On the Beach”

  1. kittysverses Avatar

    Poetic splendor, Nima. I loved these lines:- Counting not sunrise and sunset,
    but by number the sand got wet,
    What an imagination!!👍

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Honored to hear those words Kitty 🙂

      Thank you so much ❤ ❤ ❤

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      1. kittysverses Avatar

        You are welcome, Nima. 🙂

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        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          🙂 🙂 🙂

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  2. Ishita Gupta Avatar

    Absolutely gorgeous💕💕

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thanks a lot Ishita dear 🙂

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  3. michnavs Avatar

    I love the form and you’ve written a beautiful response

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thank you my dear Mich ❤

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  4. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    Beautifully written, my dear

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thank you , my dear 🙂

      Like

      1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

        You’re most welcome 🙂

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  5. paeansunplugged Avatar

    Beautifully expressed, Nima. ❤️

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thank you very much Punam dear 🙂

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      1. paeansunplugged Avatar

        My pleasure, dear. 😊

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  6. kittysverses Avatar

    Hi Nima, how have you been?

    Like

  7. kittysverses Avatar

    Hi Nima, how are you? Miss your poems. 🙂

    Like

  8. lenette P. Avatar

    Love this Nima…have lovely time reading this 🤗💖

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