Eugi’s Weekly Challenge – FLUTTER
Through the corners of my eyes,
with a flutter so gentle,
breezing the lashes a bit,
out went my dreams.
Weighed down by hopes,
nestled inside my heart chambers,
inked in languages of soliloquy,
and draped in monologues,
unfurling unknown stories
of rare and vivid sentiments.
Perching on to the rope,
woven by strings of shadows
and moonbeams,
entangled with my sleepy murmurs,
and beautiful fantasies,
they come alive – my dreams-
and talk to me in verses
of most ardent love,
rented from my memories.
Verses suppressed by time
and lost in mind’s attic,
only to rise with slumber,
and then I come alive- for real.
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A beautiful poem Nima.
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Thank you so much dear Sadje..
glad to see you after a loong time 🙂
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Same here. I hope your keeping well?
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Yes Sadje.. I had some health issues.. so had to take complete rest. Problems with shoulder disc.. so had to stop alla activities for some time.. now much better 😄 thanks for asking ☺️☺️
How are you doing?
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I’m glad you’re better now! I’m good, Blogging away as we are also in a semi-lockdown for almost two months more. Take care.
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Thank you Sadje 🙂
Yeah… lockdowns everywhere !!
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Yes, but hopefully things will get better.
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Yeah .. hopefully 😄
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👍👍👍
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Gosh where were you … that’s a beautiful poem .. how are you .. ❤️
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Hello Happy Soul ❤ Hope you are happy and safe 🙂 Thank you for the comment dear 🙂
I was on a looong break 😛 had some health issues and then got engaged in several other things 🙂 now i dont know when will be the next posting 😀
But am really happy to see you remember me 🙂
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Ohhh take care. Hope all ok now with your health.
Take your time ., I too took many breaks .. 😅😅
Ofcourse I remember you and I use the word “obdurate” so much because of that poem of yours – obdurate mister ! 😃
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hehehehee 😛 😛
yeah ok now.. had shoulder pain… was hard.. could not lift my hands,… so jad to take complete rest for some days…
How is everyone in family ?
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Hi Nima,
How are you?
These lines are very deep. 🙂
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Hello Kitty 🙂
Am good.. how are you and all at home?
Thanks a lot dear 🙂
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We are fine, Nima. Good to see you back from your break. 🙂
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Glad to know that dear 🙂
Thanks Kitty ❤
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Look who’s back with another fantastic piece!!!
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Oh.. Hi Harsh 🙂
Thanks for that welcome 😛
How have you been ?
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Harsh.. why am I not able to access your account? It says no more available 🧐
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Okay wait.
Try this:
https://theveiledpassion.wordpress.com/
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Ohh .. thats a good site name 😄
So did you change from cryptic to veiled passion?
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Yes, I did. How does it sound?
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Hiii!! 👋
I am good. How are you doing?? Long long time and no see 😟
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Hmmm yes.. see …even now… after long time replying 😄 am good Harsh 😊😊
Got busy here.. and then some health issues.. now ok 😄😄
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That’s good to hear. Will see you more often here??
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Beautifully written piece, Nima. I’m glad you are back with your lovely writing. Thank you so much for joining in.
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Thank you so much dear Eugi 😊😊
And am so happy to have joined.. feeling so good after hearing from you after what felt like ages 😊😊
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I am delighted you joined in and my pleasure!❤️
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😄😄😄
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a beautiful poem Nima… and happy to see you back here..
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Thank you Mich dear !! And am really glad to be back 😄😄
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Thanks Eugi 💗
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I hope that you are doing fine. I’ve missed you. I had been on a long break as well. I got to know more about your break through the comments.
That’s a beautiful poem. I loved how you described dreams that seem beautiful while they last only to be lost when we wake up. Very profound lines, my dear.
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Hi Nima! I missed your poems for quite a long time now, and came to check. How have you been? How’s Dev?
I was quite irregular here, and skipped this post of yours. I totally enjoyed this poem. It greatly reveals your love for poetry. ❤
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