Alive with some Flutter

Eugi’s Weekly Challenge – FLUTTER

Through the corners of my eyes,
with a flutter so gentle,
breezing the lashes a bit,
out went my dreams.
Weighed down by hopes,
nestled inside my heart chambers,
inked in languages of soliloquy,
and draped in monologues,
unfurling unknown stories
of rare and vivid sentiments.
Perching on to the rope,
woven by strings of shadows
and moonbeams,
entangled with my sleepy murmurs,
and beautiful fantasies,
they come alive – my dreams-
and talk to me in verses
of most ardent love,
rented from my memories.
Verses suppressed by time
and lost in mind’s attic,
only to rise with slumber,
and then I come alive- for real.


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        1. Yes Sadje.. I had some health issues.. so had to take complete rest. Problems with shoulder disc.. so had to stop alla activities for some time.. now much better πŸ˜„ thanks for asking ☺️☺️
          How are you doing?

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    1. Hello Happy Soul ❀ Hope you are happy and safe πŸ™‚ Thank you for the comment dear πŸ™‚

      I was on a looong break πŸ˜› had some health issues and then got engaged in several other things πŸ™‚ now i dont know when will be the next posting πŸ˜€

      But am really happy to see you remember me πŸ™‚

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      1. Ohhh take care. Hope all ok now with your health.
        Take your time ., I too took many breaks .. πŸ˜…πŸ˜…
        Ofcourse I remember you and I use the word β€œobdurate” so much because of that poem of yours – obdurate mister ! πŸ˜ƒ

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        1. hehehehee πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
          yeah ok now.. had shoulder pain… was hard.. could not lift my hands,… so jad to take complete rest for some days…

          How is everyone in family ?


  1. I hope that you are doing fine. I’ve missed you. I had been on a long break as well. I got to know more about your break through the comments.

    That’s a beautiful poem. I loved how you described dreams that seem beautiful while they last only to be lost when we wake up. Very profound lines, my dear.

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    1. Hello Shwetaa !!!!

      Enthokkendu ddo ? ENthu patti?Y such a loong break ? Ireally dont know when you resumed blogging.. am still on break 😦
      Samayam kittunnillya ellam koodi… samayam kittyalum energy illya 😦

      Thank you dear.. for those beautiful words ❀

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      1. Hello dear! I’m fine. I’m good. Orupaad valya break aayirunnu. I got married! πŸ˜ƒ
        I resumed blogging on May 23rd and that’s when I paid a visit to all my favourite bloggers from whom I hadn’t heard in a while.
        I know. It’s very difficult to juggle. I was also feeling like that. Energy illa mood illa. Ezhuthaan poyitt laptop thurakkaan polum thonilla! Enikkum anghane aayirunnu. But then after a lot of pushing from my husband, I started writing again. Ezhuthi thudangiyappol, it’s like I never stopped! And comments okke vayikkumbol bhayangara Santosham thonum. Appo njan vicharikkum entha njan ithrem valya break eduthathu! No pressure, dear. Start slowly. Maybe you can start reading initially. Pathukke your muse will come knocking on your door. I’m sure of it. What’s your email? I’ve got so much to catch up with you. I’m so glad that you decided to resurface!

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  2. Hi Nima! I missed your poems for quite a long time now, and came to check. How have you been? How’s Dev?

    I was quite irregular here, and skipped this post of yours. I totally enjoyed this poem. It greatly reveals your love for poetry. ❀

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    1. Hello Anisha… !!!!
      Am really missing this part of my world dear.
      Am not able to find much free time to write now. And when I do, I find messages from dear ones like you so heart warming πŸ™‚

      So how are you doing ?
      Am doing fine here.. and Dev is enjoying school. He has started attending school face to face this year onwards, so he is excited every day πŸ˜€

      Tell me about you !! What news at your end ?


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