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Alive with some Flutter

Eugi’s Weekly Challenge – FLUTTER


Through the corners of my eyes,
with a flutter so gentle,
breezing the lashes a bit,
out went my dreams.
Weighed down by hopes,
nestled inside my heart chambers,
inked in languages of soliloquy,
and draped in monologues,
unfurling unknown stories
of rare and vivid sentiments.
Perching on to the rope,
woven by strings of shadows
and moonbeams,
entangled with my sleepy murmurs,
and beautiful fantasies,
they come alive – my dreams-
and talk to me in verses
of most ardent love,
rented from my memories.
Verses suppressed by time
and lost in mind’s attic,
only to rise with slumber,
and then I come alive- for real.

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58 responses to “Alive with some Flutter”

  1. Sadje Avatar

    A beautiful poem Nima.

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thank you so much dear Sadje..
      glad to see you after a loong time 🙂

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        Same here. I hope your keeping well?

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        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          Yes Sadje.. I had some health issues.. so had to take complete rest. Problems with shoulder disc.. so had to stop alla activities for some time.. now much better 😄 thanks for asking ☺️☺️
          How are you doing?

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          1. Sadje Avatar

            I’m glad you’re better now! I’m good, Blogging away as we are also in a semi-lockdown for almost two months more. Take care.

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            1. Nima Mohan Avatar

              Thank you Sadje 🙂

              Yeah… lockdowns everywhere !!

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              1. Sadje Avatar

                Yes, but hopefully things will get better.

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                1. Nima Mohan Avatar

                  Yeah .. hopefully 😄

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                  1. Sadje Avatar

                    👍👍👍

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  2. HappySoul Avatar

    Gosh where were you … that’s a beautiful poem .. how are you .. ❤️

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Hello Happy Soul ❤ Hope you are happy and safe 🙂 Thank you for the comment dear 🙂

      I was on a looong break 😛 had some health issues and then got engaged in several other things 🙂 now i dont know when will be the next posting 😀

      But am really happy to see you remember me 🙂

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      1. HappySoul Avatar

        Ohhh take care. Hope all ok now with your health.
        Take your time ., I too took many breaks .. 😅😅
        Ofcourse I remember you and I use the word “obdurate” so much because of that poem of yours – obdurate mister ! 😃

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        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          hehehehee 😛 😛
          yeah ok now.. had shoulder pain… was hard.. could not lift my hands,… so jad to take complete rest for some days…

          How is everyone in family ?

          Like

  3. kittysverses Avatar

    Hi Nima,
    How are you?
    These lines are very deep. 🙂

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Hello Kitty 🙂

      Am good.. how are you and all at home?

      Thanks a lot dear 🙂

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      1. kittysverses Avatar

        We are fine, Nima. Good to see you back from your break. 🙂

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        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          Glad to know that dear 🙂

          Thanks Kitty ❤

          Like

  4. Harsh Avatar
    Harsh

    Look who’s back with another fantastic piece!!!

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Oh.. Hi Harsh 🙂

      Thanks for that welcome 😛

      How have you been ?

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      1. Nima Mohan Avatar

        Harsh.. why am I not able to access your account? It says no more available 🧐

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        1. Harsh Avatar
          Harsh

          Okay wait.
          Try this:

          Home

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          1. Nima Mohan Avatar

            Ohh .. thats a good site name 😄
            So did you change from cryptic to veiled passion?

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            1. Harsh Avatar
              Harsh

              Yes, I did. How does it sound?

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              1. Nima Mohan Avatar

                Mysterious and charming.. I loved this name ❤

                Like

      2. Harsh Avatar
        Harsh

        Hiii!! 👋
        I am good. How are you doing?? Long long time and no see 😟

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        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          Hmmm yes.. see …even now… after long time replying 😄 am good Harsh 😊😊
          Got busy here.. and then some health issues.. now ok 😄😄

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          1. Harsh Avatar
            Harsh

            That’s good to hear. Will see you more often here??

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            1. Nima Mohan Avatar

              Harsh !!
              I think you would have got answer to your question now 😛

              Like

  5. -Eugenia Avatar

    Beautifully written piece, Nima. I’m glad you are back with your lovely writing. Thank you so much for joining in.

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thank you so much dear Eugi 😊😊
      And am so happy to have joined.. feeling so good after hearing from you after what felt like ages 😊😊

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      1. -Eugenia Avatar

        I am delighted you joined in and my pleasure!❤️

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        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          😄😄😄

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  6. michnavs Avatar

    a beautiful poem Nima… and happy to see you back here..

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thank you Mich dear !! And am really glad to be back 😄😄

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  7. Eugi’s Weekly Prompt – Paradise – Roundup – Eugi's Causerie Avatar

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thanks Eugi 💗

      Like

  8. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    I hope that you are doing fine. I’ve missed you. I had been on a long break as well. I got to know more about your break through the comments.

    That’s a beautiful poem. I loved how you described dreams that seem beautiful while they last only to be lost when we wake up. Very profound lines, my dear.

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Hello Shwetaa !!!!

      Enthokkendu ddo ? ENthu patti?Y such a loong break ? Ireally dont know when you resumed blogging.. am still on break 😦
      Samayam kittunnillya ellam koodi… samayam kittyalum energy illya 😦

      Thank you dear.. for those beautiful words ❤

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      1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

        Hello dear! I’m fine. I’m good. Orupaad valya break aayirunnu. I got married! 😃
        I resumed blogging on May 23rd and that’s when I paid a visit to all my favourite bloggers from whom I hadn’t heard in a while.
        I know. It’s very difficult to juggle. I was also feeling like that. Energy illa mood illa. Ezhuthaan poyitt laptop thurakkaan polum thonilla! Enikkum anghane aayirunnu. But then after a lot of pushing from my husband, I started writing again. Ezhuthi thudangiyappol, it’s like I never stopped! And comments okke vayikkumbol bhayangara Santosham thonum. Appo njan vicharikkum entha njan ithrem valya break eduthathu! No pressure, dear. Start slowly. Maybe you can start reading initially. Pathukke your muse will come knocking on your door. I’m sure of it. What’s your email? I’ve got so much to catch up with you. I’m so glad that you decided to resurface!

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        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          Hey Shweta !!! Thatsba great news 😀😀😀

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          1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

            Thank you, dear ❤️🤗

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        2. Nima Mohan Avatar

          Congrats dear !!! Am so happy for you 😄😄😄

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          1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

            Thank you so much ❣️

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        3. Nima Mohan Avatar

          Hopefully varumayirikkum 😄😄 muse enne upekshichu thonnanu 😁

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          1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

            Muse okke thirichu varum. Don’t give up!

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            1. Nima Mohan Avatar

              😀😀😀
              Pinney njan oru insta msg ayachirunnu. Kanduo?

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              1. Shweta Suresh Avatar

                Oh njan insta ippo nokkare illa. I’ll check it now.

                Like

              2. Shweta Suresh Avatar

                Oh njan insta ippo nokkare illa. I’ll check it now.
                Illa kittiyillallo.

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  9. Anisha Avatar

    Hi Nima! I missed your poems for quite a long time now, and came to check. How have you been? How’s Dev?

    I was quite irregular here, and skipped this post of yours. I totally enjoyed this poem. It greatly reveals your love for poetry. ❤

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Hello Anisha… !!!!
      Am really missing this part of my world dear.
      Am not able to find much free time to write now. And when I do, I find messages from dear ones like you so heart warming 🙂

      So how are you doing ?
      Am doing fine here.. and Dev is enjoying school. He has started attending school face to face this year onwards, so he is excited every day 😀

      Tell me about you !! What news at your end ?

      Like

  10. Shristy Singh Avatar

    Nice blog!
    Do visit to my blog and follow it if you like.

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thank You Shrishti 🙂
      Will def. visit your blog 🙂

      Like

  11. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

    Splendid and excellent muse, Nima and for sure a perfect picture in the lap of nature.

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thats very kind of you dear 🙂 thanks a lot 😄

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      1. boundlessblessingsblog Avatar

        You are always welcome, Nima.

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        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          😄😄😄

          Like

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