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Behind those Eyes

Ronovan Writes Décima Poetry Challenge – Prompt No. 25 (STILL) This week, it’s the D rhyme line.

Do not be fooled by the silence
Try to see behind those calm eyes.
Smoldering and melting all ice,
ember mines in full defiance.
A kraken waits for violence
till held back it shall keep its calm
once released it shall change the realm.
if your lesson not learned still
prepare to become the sure kill-
sniff it from the impending qualm
.

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19 responses to “Behind those Eyes”

  1. Era Avatar

    Amazing 😍

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

      Like

  2. Shweta Suresh Avatar

    There’s more than what meets the eye at times. Beautifully written ❤️

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Indeed Shweta 🙂
      Thank you 🙂

      Like

  3. Ishita Gupta Avatar

    Wow Nima. Absolutely beautiful♥️♥️♥️

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thanks a lot dear Ishita 🙂

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  4. HappySoul Avatar

    Great take on the prompt. Awesome attempt. Beautiful poetry!

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thanks dear Happy Soul ❤

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  5. judeitakali Avatar
    judeitakali

    You went deep with this, 🤩🧡

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Yes Jude.. tried to 🙂
      Thanks for that complement 🙂

      Liked by 1 person

  6. Bacardi Gold Avatar

    Do not be fooled by the silence
    Try to see behind those calm eyes….I really love these lines. Being silent,sometimes, means acceptance or “hidden disapproval”…. Thanks a lot, Nima, Stay safe from Covid….☺☺

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thanks for reading all in a row Gold 😀
      And thanks for that beautiful comment 😃
      I totally agree with your lines 😊

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      1. Bacardi Gold Avatar

        Of course, I flew to the site and search your talent ! and I saw it…… amazing !!…..great job !😄😄

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Hey Willow 🙂

      Thanks a lllot ❤

      Like

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