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My Promise #writephoto

For Sue’s Thursday Photo Prompt – Tokens -#writephoto

A promise to render from myself,
a promise to keep forever.
Seasons, winds and life may change.
But I shall stand affirm in my word.
True as vastness of the sky,
and white love from moon.
As deep is the red for poinsettia-
bleeding flesh of heavenly embodiment,
in such a depth runs my source of words.
An autumn leaf for you-
a mix of red and  brown and orange.
When the whole season is beautiful,
do not look for beauty only in those maples,
but seek for hidden mysteries,
away from your sight or
hidden in plain sight.
The only time when death is beautiful,
and not cried upon.
There are leaves around,
to be crumbled and broken.
Listen to their voices ‘neath your shoes,
and hear those trees while they shed.
Secret of life, they might,
pass down, if  interested.
The two buttons be defined by you,
not by those colors of same birth.
I leave it to you for eternity,
let them be together every time.
Orange be your blood and
red be your soul.
Orange be contained but,
not the red- let it float and float and float.
Feather of a raven be the last.
Do not be fooled dear one,
for this be the most precious.
One intelligent black fellow,
has carried this on his wings,
being travelled to the two worlds,
one wise compass this can be.
Drop it and seek your path,
it might whisper the truth.
lest winds should dominate.

And whenever you see a face,
or something like a face,
with these three omens near,
trust me,
I have been keeping my promise,
from the beginning and even now,
even when I am defined by a piece of rock.

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Comments

47 responses to “My Promise #writephoto”

  1. Cozy Quiet Corner Avatar

    Beautiful as usual! 💙💖 🤗

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Oh dear Priya 🙂
      Thank you ❤

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  2. Era Avatar

    beautiful 💙

    how you have been?

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Hey Era dear 🙂
      Thank you !!!

      Busy 😦
      Son’s classes resumed and it is keeping me on toes !!
      You tell me… how are you doing?

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      1. Era Avatar

        Oh, okay! Take care 😊😊
        Online classes?
        Mine has been the same routine, studies, and blogs 😅😂

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        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          Yes..online 🙂
          So i have to be with him the whole time.
          When I was in India, at my home, I dint have to bother about cooking and all 😀 just his classes and have meals on time 😀 my mom was there 😛

          But here case is different. I need to take care of everything.. at least on holidays, I get a break… husband takes over everything 😀 else I would have burst out of stress :/

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          1. Era Avatar

            I know you can handle everything effortlessly 💙
            Happy to know your hubby helps you equally 😃😃😃
            Everything will be good
            Take care, keep smiling!

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            1. Nima Mohan Avatar

              Thanks a lot dear doctor ❤ ❤
              Hope So 🙂

              You too , take care..
              and hope your studies are going well ❤

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              1. Era Avatar

                💙💙🤗🤗

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  3. balroop2013 Avatar

    Mother Nature passes on all the secrets of life in her own way… profoundly expressed Nima. I like the way you’ve linked it to life.

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thank you so much dear Balroop !!
      Am so happy to have you here ❤

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  4. HappySoul Avatar

    Amazing work Nima .. I wonder how you land up with these thoughts 😊👌👌👌 beautifully placed as always ..

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      1. Nima Mohan Avatar

        Hehehe…
        Frankly, I dont know how 😀

        PLease dont misunderstand me.. both of you :/

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        1. HappySoul Avatar

          We are amazed 😄

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          1. Nima Mohan Avatar

            ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      🙂 🙂 🙂
      Am so happy with your words Happy Soul…
      Thank you sooo much 🙂 ❤

      How are you?

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      1. HappySoul Avatar

        All good Nima 😊 busy with kids schooling … most of the teaching work is on us .. elder one is ok.. younger one tough .. can’t teach the basics only 🙆‍♀️ she too is moody, lazy, doesn’t listen ..

        how’s your son’s online classes?

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        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          Same here … busy with classes and everything.
          Which classes are your kids in ?

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          1. HappySoul Avatar

            UKG and 5th 😊

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            1. Nima Mohan Avatar

              Ohh wow !!
              Mine is in LKG 🤣

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              1. HappySoul Avatar

                😂😂after 1st, 2nd it’s somehow ok .. lkg n Ukg is tough ☺️

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  5. Harsh Avatar
    Harsh

    Beautiful!! How do you write so good? Please teach me, ma’am. 🥺

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Oh dear Harsh… 😦
      I seriously dont know how to.. 😦
      Follow your heart maybe !! I am not being bossy here.. but I really dont know if I am someone to tach poetry too !! Am just writing Harsh.. this is my way of therapy 🙂

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      1. Harsh Avatar
        Harsh

        That’s not fair. You have to teach me. I don’t know if you remember this or not but, you were going to teach me and Shweta how to write such wonderful poetries. Now it’s high time you teach. 😁😛

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        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          I remember Harsh 😛 😛

          But what to do ? I really dont know!!

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          1. Harsh Avatar
            Harsh

            Try teaching us. 😂😁😛😛

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            1. Nima Mohan Avatar

              😛 😛 😛

              Like

  6. Nathi Avatar

    Amazing and brilliant as always ✨💜

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Hey NAthi 🙂

      Thank you very much dear ❤

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      1. Nathi Avatar

        Always my pleasure 😇
        Keep writing and inspiring, Nima✨

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        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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  7. Sue Vincent Avatar

    A wonderful pieceand promise, Nima.

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thank you very much Sue 😊

      Like

    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thank you very much !!
      And how should I call you? 😃

      Like

      1. Light of Life Avatar

        You are welcome dear, Sapna here.

        Liked by 1 person

        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          Hello Sapna !! 🙂

          Like

  8. kittysverses Avatar

    Your poems always soothe me. Wonderful, Nima. 🙂

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thanks a lot Kitty 🥰

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      1. kittysverses Avatar

        You are welcome, Nima. 🙂

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  9. Ishita Gupta Avatar

    I’m speechless. This is so so SO beautiful. WOW!!! Splendid!!

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thank you sooo very much dear Ishita ❤️❤️

      Liked by 1 person

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