For Eugi’s Weekly Prompt – Transition
Ronovan’s Weekly Haiku Poetry Challenge – Day and Flaw

Masking shady flaws
Sidereal day embarks change
Gloomy transition
Silent sins of day
fracturing turbulent dreams
exhausted two eyes
Reluctant sunlight
sky colored in fumes of grey
time passage delayed
Early bright sun rays
melting waxy foams of clouds
metamorphosis
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Well written dear.. wonderful series of haikus 👌
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Thank you very much Sarika ❤️
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I sense so much energy in this piece and I love how each stanza stands on its own. Amazing piece, Nima!
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Am so glad to hear this from you Eugi 😊 thank you very much ❤️❤️
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You’re most welcome! 😄
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❤️❤️❤️
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Wow. Beautiful imagery. I love the way you portrayed it 😍
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Thank you dear Shweta 😊😊
Kute time eduthu onnu ezhuthan aaytu.. Haiku syllable count onnu correct aakan wordsnte kshamam aanu 😑
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Oh I know! I suck when it comes to all these formats. I can never get the syllables perfectly. Kore failed attempts at Haiku ond. So I’m amazed at anyone who can pull it off and make it look so effortless. It was well worth the effort, dear. Thank you so much for creating this. Onam preparations okke thudangiyo?
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Hehehe 😁😁
Onam preparation onnulledo. Njan nattil aayirunnappo grandmother marichu. So ithavana onam illya.. pinne ivde aake njangal 3 per alle illu.. mikkavarum sadya hotel poyi kzhikkaranu pathivu. Allathe kure curries indakki pinne ellam waste aavum. Ithavana athum pattillya.. so ithavanathe onam simple aanu 😊
Thaniku enthenglum celebration indo avde? Nattil pokanum pattillallo 🥺 friends indo.. room mates oke?
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Loved the transition of gloomy grey to bright sunshine. Great piece Nima 💕
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Am happy that you liked it Radhika 😊 thank you very much ❤️❤️
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Each paragraph is awesome .. your words are very power Nima 😊
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Hello Happy Soul dear … ❤️❤️
Feeling happy that you loved it ❤️
How are you doing?
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doing great Nima 🙂 ❤️thank you … hows things there?
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Sorry I could not reply yesterday 🤭🤭
Going good dear.. and things are going to be super busy.. my son’s classes resumes on Sunday after the summer vacation and since it is online, I will be fully engaged 🤭 straight 4 hours class.. i dong know when I will write now 🥺🥺🥺
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Online classes are tiring for mommies. My 10 year old is ok. It’s tough with the younger one. These kinder garten learnings are so much better with group dynamics. There’s only so much we can do as a mommy.
You will write 😄as you say you ‘relax rejuvenate and motivate’ here .. you will need all that 😅
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Hehehe… hopefully 😀 😛
Thanks for the motivation dear friend 🙂 ❤
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Always around for that.. after all what are friends for 😎😉 😄
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Yes Happy Soul ❤ ❤ ❤ Thank you 🙂
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😍😍
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There were four stages of the sun coming out in the open. From a hiding sun to a partly hidden to a full sunrise. Each scene has its own defining character ! Great work! I love it.
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So keen in observing the details Gold.. am happy that you could decipher 😊😊
Thank you very much my dear 😊❤️
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You’re welcome, Nima . Be happy.
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You too.. be happy and safe 😀😀
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Thanks!
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Very powerful one Nima!
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Thanks Rashmi dear ❤️
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Gloominess to bright days! I enjoyed this transition, each and every stage. ❣
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Am happy to hear that from you dear 🙂 ❤
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THanks Eugi 🙂
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Thanks Eugi ❤
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Wow! Each haiku is superb and together they paint a lovely picture. 😀 🙂
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Hello Priya…
thank you so much dear ❤
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My pleasure ☺️
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WOW
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😊😊😊
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