Sammi Cox : Weekend Writing Prompt #161 – Obdurate
Oh Mister !! My dear Mister !!
Why doth you have two minds of own?
To my plea, listen once.
Collect for me, all those words,
That I fed you with.
Think for me ideas – new and many,
For I ache to write.
Your left with right and,
Right gone with the left.
How may I know,
dwells two minds in one?
Oh mister, why no answer?
My brain OBDURATE–
Still lends no ears.
Word Count : 72
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That’s amazing!!
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Thank you so much Aashi 😃
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Welcome ❣
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Creative!
I like how you addressed brain as obdurate and said it doesn’t lends any ear.
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Hello Rashmi.. thank you so much dear..
and sometimes my brain is such 🤣
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That’s nice!
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Thank you Harsh !! 😀
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Your left with right and,
Right gone with the left.
👌👌👌👌
And I would again say, it’s amazing Nima ❣💙
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Haha.. what more can I expect from you Era !!! 🙂 Thank you ❤
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❣🤗💙
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Great take on the prompt, dear ♥️
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Glad you liked it Shweta 🙂
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My pleasure 😊
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😊😊💞💞💞
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Wow ! Very creative one ! A great take !
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Thank you much Happy soul !! ❤
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Haha! I was wondering who was obdurate. For this beautiful poem, it’s time to thank your mister!
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Yes yes… I thanked my mister for this 🤗
And thank you dear Anisha ❤️
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You’re most welcome! ❣
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💞💞💞💞
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