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The Teetotaler / Poem for 7/10/2019

Teetotaler tried to tally
Total tips the tenth time.
Teetotaler could not tally
Total tips the tenth time.

Teetotaler twisted his tongue
Tried telling the tongue twister.
The teetotaler twitched and twisted
The teetotaler trained to twist
The teetotaler then twisted
To tell the tongue twister.

But,

Teetotaler tried to tally
Total tips the tenth time.
Teetotaler could not tally
Total tips the tenth time.
Teetotaler then thought ten times
Teetotaler then turned to a twit
The teetotaler then tried
No more teetotaling.







The prompts: Tongue, Tasting, Speaking
Suggested Poetry Type : Tongue Twister

Trying a tongue twister for the first time.
Please read and comment πŸ™‚

This being my entry for OctPoWriMo 2019 – Day 7
http://www.octpowrimo.com/2019/10/octpowrimo-day-7.html

Comments

16 responses to “The Teetotaler / Poem for 7/10/2019”

  1. Maz Avatar

    Interesting and certainly a tongue twister.

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Hehe.. Thank you maz !! πŸ™‚

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  2. Cara Hartley Avatar
    Cara Hartley

    Kind of reminds me of my time working as a waitress.
    I was most assuredly not a teetotaler at that time.
    Neither were most of my co-workers.

    ~Cie~

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      And that would have been better than explaining our reasons for teetotaling !! Right Cie ?
      Thank you for stopping by here !!

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  3. paeansunplugged Avatar

    Totally twisted my tongue trying to tally the tallies!
    Excellent. πŸ˜€

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    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thank you so much @paeansunplugged !!
      Thank yo for reading. Glad you liked it πŸ™‚

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      1. paeansunplugged Avatar

        You are welcome, Nima. I am Punam. πŸ™‚

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        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          Oh !! Hi Punam πŸ™‚ Thank you !

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          1. paeansunplugged Avatar

            πŸ™‚πŸ‘πŸΌ

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  4. Rall Avatar

    A totally terrific tantalising tumultouous twister treat!

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Thank you rall for the wornderful wonder words of wisdom !! :p

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  5. Angela van Son Avatar

    I linked to yours in my post today, I love it! What’s really funny to me is how it reminds me of being drunk πŸ™‚

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Hehe πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ thank you so much for that ❀️

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    2. Nima Mohan Avatar

      Can you please give me the link of that page ?

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        1. Nima Mohan Avatar

          Thank you dear !! πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸ»

          Like

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