Teetotaler tried to tally
Total tips the tenth time.
Teetotaler could not tally
Total tips the tenth time.
Teetotaler twisted his tongue
Tried telling the tongue twister.
The teetotaler twitched and twisted
The teetotaler trained to twist
The teetotaler then twisted
To tell the tongue twister.
But,
Teetotaler tried to tally
Total tips the tenth time.
Teetotaler could not tally
Total tips the tenth time.
Teetotaler then thought ten times
Teetotaler then turned to a twit
The teetotaler then tried
No more teetotaling.

The prompts: Tongue, Tasting, Speaking
Suggested Poetry Type : Tongue Twister
Trying a tongue twister for the first time.
Please read and comment 🙂
This being my entry for OctPoWriMo 2019 – Day 7
http://www.octpowrimo.com/2019/10/octpowrimo-day-7.html
Interesting and certainly a tongue twister.
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Hehe.. Thank you maz !! 🙂
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Kind of reminds me of my time working as a waitress.
I was most assuredly not a teetotaler at that time.
Neither were most of my co-workers.
~Cie~
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And that would have been better than explaining our reasons for teetotaling !! Right Cie ?
Thank you for stopping by here !!
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Totally twisted my tongue trying to tally the tallies!
Excellent. 😀
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Thank you so much @paeansunplugged !!
Thank yo for reading. Glad you liked it 🙂
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You are welcome, Nima. I am Punam. 🙂
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Oh !! Hi Punam 🙂 Thank you !
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🙂👍🏼
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A totally terrific tantalising tumultouous twister treat!
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Thank you rall for the wornderful wonder words of wisdom !! :p
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I linked to yours in my post today, I love it! What’s really funny to me is how it reminds me of being drunk 🙂
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Hehe 😂😂 thank you so much for that ❤️
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Can you please give me the link of that page ?
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https://unassortedstories.wordpress.com/2019/10/07/sometimes/
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Thank you dear !! 😊👍🏻
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