Moon !! Oh Moon!!
My love ,my love!!
Do I stand a chance,
To be your own.
I know, I know that,
You have been
Put into tests of love
So far.
So far, so far,
That you have lost
Faith in love almost.
The scars!! Those black scars,
That dim your white
Stands as proof.
Proof of all the pain
You had in love.
You know now and
You always knew,
That those scars
Never will fade.
Time wont heal,
Or take it back.
Still you shine like
Bright and new,
Bringing hope toย
All in Love.
You teach and
You always taught,
That storm and rain
And snowfall,
Shall give way
To new days and
New chances.
So my love, my love,
My Moon !!
Do I stand a chance
To be your own.
I promise and
I give my word,
That I shall not
Give you more scars.
So my love ,my love,
My Moon!!
Do I stand a chance
To be your own.
Oh dear
Beautifully penned ๐ ๐ฏ
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Happy to know that you liked it !!
And thank you for following ๐
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Glad to have u in mi zone ๐
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Me too ๐
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Lovely verses!
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Than you !! ๐
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Thank you so much!
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Good one Nima….๐
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Thank you dear !
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Like your poem’s , excellent keep working on your presentation ,
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Than you so much ๐
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The best poem about the moon I have ever seen on a blog. The moon does have someone who truly loves her and the readers can feel how much the lover adores the moon.
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YEah.. the moon has always been a wonder since childhood ๐
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Loved it ๐
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Thank you dear ๐
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Oh I am definitely a fan ๐
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Beautifully written! You are a very talented poet, Nima. So glad to have come acroos you. I strongly recommend you and all your followers my friend Mario Savioni’s novel “Pickles and Tarts” (very short chapters, easy to read9. It is a story where 54-year-old Frank has been selected by 19-year-old Nicole through a dating site. Frank looks at Nicoleโs photos on the site and is attracted to her beauty. Nicole tells him she has a boyfriend and is not interested in a romantic relationship. She adds: โItโs fun to talk to different people sometimes.โ The only apparent thing Frank and Nicole seem to have in common is their interest to write stories. Perhaps they want to meet just to write one together? Now Frank has already started to imagine this story, a story-within-the-main-story. “Pickles and Tarts” is a lovely story of illusion-delusion, dream-reality, non-conformist with the Capitalist system, reflective on love, sex, drugs, abuse, loneliness and human relationships in todayโs world. It is profound and highly intriguing. I recommend chapters 11 and 12 that especially deal with sexual abuse, bullying and loneliness:
https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/03/24/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-11/
https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/03/31/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-12/
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Sure !! Would love to read them ๐
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Please read them and comment if you can. ๐
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Sure thing ๐
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Thank you again! โค
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Beautiful composition, Nima!โฃ
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This is still my favorite.. and one of the first set of poems. was not so sure then. Glad you liked it ๐
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This deserves to be an all-time favourite!
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Thank you dear โค
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The day Moon will read your poem he will be in love with you! ๐ ๐
Loved it!
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Ohh !! How I wish for that dear Bhavya !! Thank you ๐๐โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Beautiful!๐ I loved the end.
Congratulations, Nimz!๐ค
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Hello Bold Girl !! Thank you dear !! And my regards to your Artificial Husband ๐คฃ๐คฃ๐คฃ he loves you much โค๏ธโค๏ธ
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Hehehhee…๐คฃ I never knew, the death of my artificial husband would bring win for me.๐๐
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Yes ๐๐ exactly what I meant ๐๐
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Hehehehe…
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