Oh Moon, My Love/ Poem

Moon !! Oh Moon!!
My love ,my love!!
Do I stand a chance,
To be your own.
I know, I know that,
You have been
Put into tests of love
So far.
So far, so far,
That you have lost
Faith in love almost.
The scars!! Those black scars,
That dim your white
Stands as proof.
Proof of all the pain
You had in love.
You know now and
You always knew,
That those scars
Never will fade.
Time wont heal,
Or take it back.
Still you shine like
Bright and new,
Bringing hope toΒ 
All in Love.
You teach and
You always taught,
That storm and rain
And snowfall,
Shall give way
To new days and
New chances.
So my love, my love,
My Moon !!
Do I stand a chance
To be your own.
I promise and
I give my word,
That I shall not
Give you more scars.
So my love ,my love,
My Moon!!
Do I stand a chance
To be your own.

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  1. Beautifully written! You are a very talented poet, Nima. So glad to have come acroos you. I strongly recommend you and all your followers my friend Mario Savioni’s novel “Pickles and Tarts” (very short chapters, easy to read9. It is a story where 54-year-old Frank has been selected by 19-year-old Nicole through a dating site. Frank looks at Nicole’s photos on the site and is attracted to her beauty. Nicole tells him she has a boyfriend and is not interested in a romantic relationship. She adds: β€œIt’s fun to talk to different people sometimes.” The only apparent thing Frank and Nicole seem to have in common is their interest to write stories. Perhaps they want to meet just to write one together? Now Frank has already started to imagine this story, a story-within-the-main-story. “Pickles and Tarts” is a lovely story of illusion-delusion, dream-reality, non-conformist with the Capitalist system, reflective on love, sex, drugs, abuse, loneliness and human relationships in today’s world. It is profound and highly intriguing. I recommend chapters 11 and 12 that especially deal with sexual abuse, bullying and loneliness:

    https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/03/24/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-11/
    https://savioni.wordpress.com/2019/03/31/pickles-and-tarts-chapter-12/

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